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Display any old sentences, and i'll secretly  fall apart.

I'm unspeakably  numb.

between black smoke and white umbrellas,  silence ran away.

your arms wrapped around my mind

Behind ears ,

            With paper thin whispers.

There are wet footprints on the floor, after dry rain.


Silhouettes under the window sil


warm, peppered words slept underneath your eyes

seething through your lips, you've erased me.


grief table stumbles


f   
      a            l                                                                  e          
                            l                                              v                             r
                                        e n                 O


I need all of you.



"I cant find forever in your eyes
I will leave you while they're dry."


In This  bulletproof glass with eyes closed

still hard to say whats going on.

with fingers roaming through tears


S t a y

Helpless and beautiful.
somewhat a current continuation of [link]
Rain In a black box

similar mind frame, regardless of how much you think you know, how you feel. the heart is a crazy heavy thing to burden. and when mistreated it simply Collapses.

i guess i will be traveling for two weeks from tomorrow so i will write more, sketch. etc.

Listening to: Muse /Radiohead / Nine In Nails / Porcupine tree/ Death Cab For Cutie.

basically a result of sleepless night and many thoughts.

*not here, gone gone*
:hug:
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:iconhell-on-a-stick:
hell-on-a-stick Featured By Owner May 23, 2009  Professional Writer
still a hard to say

could that be

'still hard to say' or still is hard to say?
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bohemianpoets Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
"still hard to say"
curse my epic typing skills, i really should read over it slower

thank you :aww:
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hell-on-a-stick Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2009  Professional Writer
:giggle:
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hell-on-a-stick Featured By Owner May 23, 2009  Professional Writer
i have been admiring this for a time.
very good. but sil is spelled sill.
you make nice complete ideas with little filler.
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bohemianpoets Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
:heart::heart:
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hell-on-a-stick Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2009  Professional Writer
:giggle:
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Madfairy7 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
Featured in my newest journal <3
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bohemianpoets Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
thank you! most kind :aww:
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SirceUnlimited Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2008   Writer
sorry for the dissapearance, the computer didn't become operational until today, and before that I'd had limited access to myspace through my cellphone. I didn't even think to try it until it was already a day too late.

This is beautiful all in all <999 :hug:
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SeraAmadis Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008
Lovely :heart: The words as well as the visual way in which you put them together...They seem to pin down what I feel right now, you know?
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DNAngela Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008
Again, just plain emotion,
Splattered on a page, as is Jazz's style. xD
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LittleLottexo Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
The honesty pours out of this like beauty in fleeting meteor showers.
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bohemianpoets Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
i have missed you greatly my panda twinn :hug:
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LittleLottexo Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I have missed you too! Tell me about your life!
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ashesanddisarray Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
lovely. i've always been a fan of what you did with the letters. the first time i saw that it was different colors, and periods inbetween the letters of some words. very neat. :D
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bohemianpoets Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
thank you dear :aww:
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ashesanddisarray Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
welcome. :D
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inkteardrops Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008  Student
<3.. i love this
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:iconbohemianpoets:
bohemianpoets Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
thank you dear :aww:
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myheartsong Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2008
Beautifully done, as per usual. :]
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ScribbledNotes Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2008
fallen over is REALLY cool to see. :heart:
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bohemianpoets Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
i love playing my style :heart:
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ScribbledNotes Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008
And I love seeing it!
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