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I taught myself how to cry today
But The pain was  so unbearable  that I  tried to wipe them away

These stupid tears
I fought so hard to stop them  from falling ,
Regardless they fell.

The day you left
Small beads of sweat studded your skin like diamonds,
Then they broke and trickled down.
Escaped  below  the recessed line of your spine
your lips were cracked and you wore that shirt I hated.

You forgot to say goodbye.



I think my heart stopped working



I laid on the  kitchen floor that night
Pressed up against the cold ground, because I wanted to hear my heart beat
I fell asleep there and woke with dry tears.


2:am

I made a panda out of  socks and a sweater
I dreamt that you  pulled him to pieces .
The next morning I couldn’t find him, it took me days before I realized that
He was never really there.


Cracked lips.


I don’t think like panda’s anymore.
:iconbohemianpoets:

all; I shall fully return soon' forgive me.</b>
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:iconwowgypsy:
I have fought many a time with my tears, but they too,do fall.
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:iconbohemianpoets:
*bohemianpoets Aug 24, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
know the feeling all too well
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:iconwowgypsy:
sad, but true.
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*bohemianpoets Sep 29, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
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:iconclippers0507:
COME back, my dear.

This was wonderful. I haven't had proper internet in ages and read this on my iPod Touch and was like, WHOA.

But didn't have the chance to comment, but I am now!

I really did like this. I felt placed back into a age and space where pain was beginning to be my best friend. It seems like it's coming back around to me again, but this time dressed up in different shades of trickery, but it's still the same ol results.

Anyway... I miss you terribly. Hope, pray all is well. :hug: :glomp: :heart:
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:iconinkteardrops:
aww! i always love your work! and this is just another great reminder why i do! <3!
:hug:
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:iconseraamadis:
:( :hug: Your heart still works...
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:iconbohemianpoets:
*bohemianpoets Jul 3, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
awwh =[
:hug:
i guess it just hurts
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:iconseraamadis:
:( I am sorry. I don't know what happened, but I do hope you feel better soon; if there's anything I can do to help you through your grieving, let me know...
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:icondnangela:
I wish we could share some tea and talk about this.
For now, comments will have to do.

In this darkness, everything still whispers beauty.
:heart:
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