I could stand here forever alone in this rain
Counting the cloudbursts that fell over me
Arctic, Trickling down my spine.
01.
I had this dream ,
That We faded in.. chasing cranes
Youd count them each time they hit the floor
And just stare as if a part of you had fallen apart.
(Always the Gray ones. )
I would hold your hand so tight, because I was afraid you would Really fall apart.
There we were, standing with fallen cranes.
After a while they turned black;
And Youd fade away.
Id close my eyes and pretend you were still there
See, I could never find you through these tears.
02.
Ive imagined the way you would.
Youd wrap your arms around my mind,
You felt so warm,
Strange and beautiful.
Youd kissed my neck, I kissed your fingertips.
Its The way your eyes smiled, as you fell asleep.
04.
I cant find, Forever in your eyes
I should leave while they are dry.
When Paper cranes are fading in around you,
you wont be the one to fade away this time.
I could never really say it, but i think you should know that
I think you're amazing
your words are brilliant my dear!
always leave me at the edge of my seat ..(literally)
wow... amazing!
your comments always makes me smile miss, as ive always told you
I almost wrote tonight...instead, I took the journal that has all of my letters in it to him, and just drew my feelings...just abstract art that reflected my mind. Maybe one day I'll put those thoughts into words...maybe it will be this eloquent.
Hope ur well!
This is truly wonderful, it made me so dreamy. I love the original way of composing the visual part of this poem.
Writing "in love" as "inlove", as a one word action (because that's what is really is) makes this so much more.
I can feel everything you're saying.
I love the rhythm of this. You do such a good job. Chin up, mon ami.